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Hoyt
(54,770 posts)MLAA
(19,194 posts)Though it looks great as is.
MontanaMama
(24,402 posts)of a winery.
GreenPartyVoter
(73,293 posts)Sanity Claws
(22,186 posts)If you do, maybe something in the upper right corner? A dark cloud that casts a shadow and adds some ambiguity in mood? Maybe just a more intense blue in part of the sky?
wendyb-NC
(4,239 posts)JDC
(10,716 posts)I use water colors and ink pen a lot and I sometimes overdo it. I have found that if I walk away from something or put it away for a month, then review it later, it is much better than I thought originally. Perceived "imperfections" at the time of creation are assets in 2 weeks.
I think this is really, really good. Frame and hang it.
Thanks for sharing.
Karadeniz
(24,354 posts)flying rabbit
(4,843 posts)vegetation closest to us, and make the sky less monochromatic.
bif
(25,378 posts)Maybe add a little more contrast in the sky. But otherwise, I wouldn't change a thing.
Star-Thrower
(309 posts)more shades of green? I would darken the sky a little bit, but this is your work not mine, and it is as it should be. So keep up the good work!